Once, There Was A girl Named Pauline,Always alone all by her self.She was a grade 7 student. After a year,She met a girl. That girl has full of insecurities.They never became friends. The girl was always angry to Pauline. But, Pauline met a boy named Eiffel. They became bestfriends. Pauline never mind the girl anymore. But, she found out that Eiffel and the girl was a very close friends. Eiffel heard about what was happening to Pauline and the girl. So Eiffel decided to comfort and listen on both sides. After, The three became friends. Less insecurities,less worries.They are always together.
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work on your grammar but the story is good
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Deletenice ending... :)
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DeleteThe story was nice but you need to use correct grammar next time:))
ReplyDeleteOks..Thank You =D
DeleteIt has a nice ending.... you just need some improvements..
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DeleteThe story is so cute! And even the character's name! Eiffel Tower!
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Deletegood.....very good
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DeleteNice story :D
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DeleteNice story and nice names Pauline & Eiffel =D
ReplyDeleteAyiee. Thank You Jonas =D
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